I writ this story about this photo in class for a task.
One crazy night in Afghanistan an American soldier saw in his night vision goggles was a guy with a dead dog. on his back so then he just left the guy to walk away then the soldier saw the moon coming up and said to himself damm they might see us in the light of the moon. So he tried to cover himself but when he looked in his night vision goggles he saw that man again with a bomb on his back not a dead dog.
So then he tried to find his gun but could not find it or see it in the dark so he got scared for his life and tried to call for backup but it would've been too loud so he has to wait for backup in the daylight then he looked in his night vision goggles again and saw him with his backpack off trying to set the bomb. So the soldier just said to himself i'm going to call for backup so he did.
When he called for backup he did it quite so the bomber would not hear him and he just did it quite enough so he will not find him or hear him. When back up came they shot him to bits with holes everywhere in his body and they deactivated the bomb so no one died.
nice work
ReplyDeleteI love this story its very good
ReplyDeleteit is a story that pulls you in to it
ReplyDeleteHey Patrick, this is a really nice story, but one of your sentences don't start with a capital letter, and maybe change the start of your sentences so it doesn't just say so. Maybe go back over it and edit it once more. Great work
ReplyDeletethanks I will go over as soon as I can.
Deletenice just saying that it says writ you mean wrote
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