my shoe recount.

My Holiday

I was in a dark place I wanted my person to put his foot in me I could see him walking around the room but I could not see much then out of nowhere I saw his hand reaching for me under the bed but he could not find me so I got scared that I would be replaced but then he got me by the tongue and put me on his foot and jumped outside and walk him his beast that tries to kill me with is its pointy teeth and crazy tail as my person was drawing me in water his demon pet started to bite my head but my person stopped him. After my walk my person put his foot me the back of me and kick me off his foot and I hit the ground so hard I could not breath I was waiting all night to be worn again but he just never did.

One afternoon I was having a good sleep on the washing line because I stunk to much but I loved the wash it was fun and I got to drink all the water and it threw me around when I was dry I was getting really hot and wanted to get my person to come and wear me I saw my person on the phone talking but I could not hear what he was saying. Then my person put the phone done and come over to me and said yes your dry so he ripped my tongue of the line and it hurt he put me on and got on his bike and I did not like the middle spikes going in to me but I like going around and around we got to a house that I have not seen before but it was ok when I got in the house he took me off and put me in his bag I could not see anything but I could smell weird smells I could hear them and the bag kept being thrown around the room and it hurt a lot I saw a hand going into the bag to grab me but no my person grab his phone. Like his phone is more important than me. The next morning my person grabbed me and put me on he was with another person that was walking with my person but then he left and we were all alone but that was not to bad.

One day of the week I was left under the couch alone I could hear my person trying to find me but he could not hear or see me but then I saw the light of the couch lifting up and I could see my person saving me he got me and put me on with his stinky feet. When we got out of the house it was pouring down with rain and hail so my person ran back inside to get his car keys and we went in the car, I love the car I get to push down the gas and make the car go fast and slow. When I got to town the ground was really cold. My person went into this really weird place that look like it was never used in like 5 years but my person kept saying no no no when people came up to him so he just left the store and got back in this car and pushed me down on the pedals until we got back home.

I was stuck under cords and cords and more cords and they kept giving me electric shocks my person was on the couch playing games on his computer and not putting me on I was getting mad because my person has been wearing his flip flops all day and not me. Later that night my person went to Mcdonalds to get a feed but it was disgusting with all the food and dirt on the floor and people keep dropping things on me and there was old food on the ground that look like it was there since six years ago. I just wanted to leave but my person did not so I just had to wait on this disgusting ground for two more then my person stood up and left and I was so happy.   

                                                             The end      Patrick

This week in our class we have been learning to do recounts and we need to have in our recount a tittle and when,who,what,where,why, in the Orientation. A middle and a middle has the events that happen in order. then a conclusion and a conclusion is what happened in the ending. After all that we needed to have a evaluative e.g. says my holiday was grete.